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**[[Deadly Vows]]**

Something old
Something new
Something borrowed
Something you

Make way for things to come
Down the aisle you come undone

Flee for mercy
Flee for life
Flee for someone else you desire

Run from us
Run from this
Run from them

Leave me teary
Leave me cold
Leave me to alone grow old

Years from now you return
I awaited, but still left alone
My eyes are blank, dead and destroyed
You take one look and find your soul

All is forgiven and forgotten
But alas I am no more
As I saw you I drifted further

As I drifted I was happy
I saw you one more time
Saw you waiting for me happily

And I smiled as I slowly left you for the first time, cold, lonely, old, alone.

[[Deadly Vows]]

**[[..Dont tell me what Im not..]]**
Wrote this when I was 14/15.

Not totally horrified by it. Definitely not the best or worst thing I wrote when I was that age!
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I-Love-To-Comment Nov 4, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow, I could picture this as a real song :) I even heard a melody for it in my head! If only I played an instrument <3
KiraTheKiller Nov 4, 2012  Student Filmographer
Ooh really? I never thought about it being a song. My 16 year old angst ridden self wrote it to someone in a bout of silly-anger haha!

Glad you like it though!
I think you should learn the Sax and we'll perform it in a jazz-poetry style cafe somewhere hip.

I can dream...haha :happybounce:
I-Love-To-Comment Nov 6, 2012  Student General Artist
Ah the saxamaphune XD that'd be so cool!

I used to write a lot of poetry at that age too, but never had the confidence to keep any of it - but rocking out in a dinky cafe sounds awesome - I call 'Playhouse'! Norwich one is amazing :#1:
KiraTheKiller Nov 4, 2012  Student Filmographer
Also apparently I was 14/15... not 16... :dummy:
This was very sad, and I loved it ^_^
KiraTheKiller Aug 31, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thanks very much! :squee:
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